The last time an ad agency tried its hand at a blackout poem, it was for a Lexus ad. Today’s ad agency blackout poem comes from Microsoft, on page four of the Marketplace section of the Wall Street Journal:

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It’s part of Microsoft’s new $150,000,000 advertising campaign. Read more about it here.

Since the folks at Microsoft are such big fans, it seems only right and natural that they should buy each of their 60,000 employees a copy of Newspaper Blackout Poems in September.

That’s fair, right?

(Spotted again by the eagle-eyed Linda Ball. Mark Larson pointed me to the image.)

UPDATE: see more ads from the campaign in the comments of this post

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  1. says


    A very poor imitation, though.

    It might be nice to see your idea in print, but surely you’re a little narked that they nabbed it rather than asked you to do it for them..? I hate that kind of thing.

  2. says

    Just discovered your blog. I really like it. I will most definitely be back. I am just a writer who writes and so I am amazed by someone can write and manage anything else but sleeping.

  3. Anonymous says

    Seriously. Credit ought to be given where credit is due. Couldn’t you demonstrate proof of having created this idea before Microsoft used it in their add?

  4. says

    Just for the record–you can’t copyright an idea. Ad agencies “borrow” from artists all the time. I’m not suggesting legal action should be taken–I’m just throwing these up here so y’all can take a look.

    And Microsoft: I’m absolutely serious about the books! Think of the joy it could give your cubicle workers on their commute/lunchbreak!


  5. illy says

    when ads “borrow” ideas, especially signature ideas like a warhol look or the like, people usually recognize the source.
    the reason why these campaigns piss me off is that you are not a household name (yet), and so the approach smacks more of a rip off.
    also, for whatever it’s worth, your look is quiet and somber, silent and aware.
    this red-out and x-ing out looks kinda violent.
    really bloody.
    kinda like what syd vicious would do if he ran with your idea.
    just talking out loud.
    you rule.
    microsoft is easy to hate… and i usually do what is easy.

  6. says

    Here’s an article in Advertising Age about the Microsoft campaign. Excerpt:

    While Microsoft initially introduced advertising for the People Ready product in 2006, the new work from JWT, New York, launched last week adopts a new tack, and its timing is something the shop says is not wholly coincidental.

    “We wanted to be forceful about it,” said Walt Connelly, JWT’s executive creative director. “The idea that business isn’t personal is ridiculous. Business is very, very personal. We wanted to say the old way is gone.”

    To achieve that sentiment, the print ads take a whack at the typical CEO success profile, redacting bloated axioms and narrow thinking and leaving only a handful of words meant to emulate this “new” mode of business. The spared words pieced together in the Wall Street Journal version, for example, declare, “It’s everybody’s business to be on the same page.”

    Mr. Connelly said JWT worked closely with each magazine in which the ads would appear — including Time, Newsweek, Forbes, Business Week and Fortune — taking pains to emulate particular styles and fonts to make their point as seamless as possible.

    “It was labor-intensive,” said Tim Galles, creative director at JWT. “We went through a lot of red markers.”

    (Emphasis mine.)

  7. says

    “We went through a lot of red markers.” Gawd, what a reminder that I toil still in such a whorish industry… Nothing worse than a stolen idea except a stolen idea repurposed and executed so horribly.

    I suggest sending an autographed copy to both Bill Gates and to this Tim Galles, to show them how it should be done.

  8. Vinegar Tom says

    If we’re talking “rip off”, Have none of you heard of or seen Tom Phillips’ “A Humument”? A little perspective …